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"There is so much useful information in this essay; it simply needs some organization and editing to form a strong paper.
It is difficult to tell what the main idea of this essay is until the reader is several paragraphs in. The introduction and first paragraph make it sound like you will be discussing nostalgia. Come up with a strong thesis statement and try not to stray too far from your main idea.
There is a lot of repetition in this essay, both between paragraphs and even within the same paragraph. Often information feels like it was added as an afterthought. Consider making an outline with a specific topic for each paragraph. Make sure you introduce the appropriate context before delving into that subject.
You mention Coontzs without telling the reader who this is. This is one example of missing context.
Consider working with an editor to address grammar and syntax issues. There are frequent errors which make the essay difficult to follow."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). How mass media influences our nostalgia. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-mass-media-influences-our-nostalgia-ACo8a1D6
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("How Mass Media Influences Our Nostalgia.")
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