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My father Khalid has a very bad temper First of all at home he yells at everybody specially me One day when I was taking a shower he knocked the door real hard In a angry way asked me to get my butt out of the rest room quickly So I came out of the rest room in a hurry Another time my mom had made pancakes and omelets He threw the plate on the floor and he said to my mom cant you make anything right He also yelled at me what the hell are you looking at Another time my uncle invited u to a party and we went together I was laughing with my cousin My father insulted me in front of everyone Why are you laughing like a donkey After the party was over when we were coming back to the house he shouted at my mom without nay reason He said Why the hell were you talking to Sarah I dont like her husband My mom said I said hello to everyone if I said hello to her so whats the big deal My father said why the hell are you arguing with me and then he slapped her Then my mom started to cry Finally I decided to leave the house because I was tired of all this problems But I cant leave my mom alone and she loved me a lot I asked her if she could come with me but she cant because according to our traditions women doesnt leave her husbands house I told my mom that dad is a big mouth He yells at us all the time One day when he left for work I packed my bags and left the house It was over I couldnt bear his anger
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