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Kibin. (2024). Osteoporosis in zero gravity. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/osteoporosis-in-zero-gravity-UIWuxklB
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"I assume your first sentence is in the form of a definition, as it is incorrect as a normal sentence. You should not capitalize common nouns (e.g., "human," "calcium"). I notice a space before a semicolon, and you write "-eg;" to start a sentence. You should write "e.g.," and precede it with a comma and space, as this continues a sentence and does not start a new one. As a matter of style, you write "its tenacity, elasticity and its resilience." You should write "its" three times or one time, but not two times. You write a slash with a space on either side, and then you write it correctly in the same sentence, which shows both an error and inconsistency. In the same sentence you write "his" and "she/she." You write "-demineralization-" with spaces before and after. There should be no spaces, and you should use an em dash, which is shift-option-dash on my Mac, and I believe ctrl-alt-dash on a PC. Take care to use articles (a, an, the) as needed, and do not use an ampersand instead of "and." Your information is organized well and presented clearly. If you avoiding errors in writing, the presentation will be that much stronger."
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In-text citation:
(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). Osteoporosis in zero gravity. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/osteoporosis-in-zero-gravity-UIWuxklB
In-text citation:
("Osteoporosis in Zero Gravity.")
Works Cited entry:
"Osteoporosis in Zero Gravity." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/osteoporosis-in-zero-gravity-UIWuxklB
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1. "Osteoporosis in Zero Gravity." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/osteoporosis-in-zero-gravity-UIWuxklB.
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"Osteoporosis in Zero Gravity." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/osteoporosis-in-zero-gravity-UIWuxklB.
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