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An Introduction to the Life and Political History of Franklin D. Roosevelt

This is an essay about the writer's opinion of President Franklin D. Roosevelt. The author was tasked with writing about who they would like to have dinner with. They chose Franklin D. Roosevelt because they viewed him as a hero. The author views Roosevelt as a hero because of Roosevelt's courage and resolve while managing his health problems (polio) while also carrying the country through the Great Depression. In addition, Roosevelt is well-known for establishing the New Deal and creating jobs during the Great Depression and World War II.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done an excellent job of writing a paper that communicates a purpose and stays focused on the topic. You did this by including a substantial amount of factual information that supports your points.

There are a couple of places in the paper that feel like they deserve more development. This is highlighted when you state opinions but do not necessarily explain why you have those opinions. Overall, your paper is well-organized, with a clear introduction and conclusion. I would suggest that you make the second paragraph be your introduction, though, because it highlights your paper's purpose and aligns with the ending.

There are no noticeable errors in the formatting of your document, which is essential because a neat paper is easier to read. I do suggest that you cite any factual information that you obtained from texts, though, to avoid possible plagiarism issues. Last, you did a great job with grammar and punctuation. There were only a few minor errors that you can resolve by doing a read-through of the paper."

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