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A Biography of Martin Luther, the Famous Reformant

This is an informative essay in which the author discusses Martin Luther and his impact on Western Christianity. The author goes into detail about Martin Luther's life starting with his birth and going on to discuss his education as a Biblical scholar and his authorship of the Ninety-Five Theses.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job including a significant number of facts so that the reader thoroughly understands the topic. You have also done a great job neatly formatting your essay so it is easier to read. Your essay seems to lack an introduction, which is making it harder to understand what the goal of your essay is. On one hand, it seems like the goal is to explain the permanent division in Western Christianity, but on the other hand, you end the essay asking and answering questions. It might be more appropriate for these questions to be scattered throughout the essay rather than lumped at the end. The essay also does not end with a clear conclusion, which also impacts understanding the goal of the essay. The conclusion is an opportunity to summarize the main points made in the essay and reiterate the goal of the paper. There are also a handful of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors that need to be resolved. Last, despite the use of facts and there being a reference at the end, there are no citations in the document. Make sure to cite any information that you obtained from another source to avoid plagiarism issues. "

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