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The Status and Treatment of Women in Muslim Society

This essay discusses the status and treatment of women in Muslim society, and their basis in the Quran.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Jim's feedback:

"Your essay is focused and has a clear purpose, but there are still some elements to improve. As a modifier, “second class” should be hyphenated. “Manor” should be “manner.” Your quote in the second paragraph lacks a second single quotation mark, there should be a space before the citation, and the period should be placed after the citation. You spell “Quran” in two ways. You write “the” instead of “they” at the end of page 1. There are numerous other spelling and grammatical issues. It is good practice to run a grammar check, and to proofread your work. Take care to avoid comma splices. This is the use of a comma to link what should be two sentences. Use commas when needed for clarity. A good example is your list of four points, where a comma should appear after “one” through “fourth.” Your title is “Men in Muslim Society,” but the essay is really about women, and you should make the appropriate change."

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