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An Introduction to the Mormon Religion from Joseph Smith to Today

This essay introduces the reader to the religion of Mormonism, describing its history, main figures in its development, central beliefs, lifestyle and culture, and demographics. The student explains that its growth and normalization in the popular imagination is thanks to a robust missionary program.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"This paper offers a solid introduction to the topic, accomplishing the goal defined in the opening paragraphs. The combination of first person statements and an objective tone creates ethos, acting as a guide for the reader. Whether the use of sections and subheadings is appropriate will be determined by your assignment parameters. Each section is structured well, with a good sense of focus and logical progression; make sure to check your style guide for formatting rules, as the current draft is in consistent on this point. Related, check up on punctuating around the in-text citations; while you have not listed your preferred reference style, likely you will place the period after the parenthetical.

You will want to apply a careful proofread to catch somewhat frequent errors, including missing apostrophes and capitalization; these look like typos, but whatever the source of an issue is, keep in mind that it impacts both clarity and ethos."

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