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New York was washing by the tropical storm last Friday it seemed to clean out each inch of dirt at every corner of the city The chilly wind was blowing outside I could see the trees dancing in front of my window I was at home I should thank the storm for a day-off so I could do some housework I found a photograph album under my bed when I was cleaning the house It was a pretty old one I opened it laugh was all I could do at that moment That was because I saw a picture of mine which was taken ten years ago In the picture my cousins and I were standing together laughing and hugging we were joyful I was about nine then dressed in a very unfashionable way The picture brought back many memories of myself the cheerful me the unhappy me the curious me the nave me I started to look at the photos one by one When I turned to one page I saw a picture of my grandfather and me In the picture my grandfather was sitting in the easy chair comfortably I was sitting on my grandfathers knee both smiling As I looked closer I realized that grandfathers smile was a little bit sickly In my indistinct memory I couldnt find any images that indicate my grandfather was unhealthy What I remembered was his smile and how much care he had for me We lived in a village close to the city name-Goung Zhou back in China Every evening Grandfather liked to take a walk after supper Usually he would bring me with him Grandfather would tell me a story as we walking along a small stream He and I would stay at the lawn at the end of the stream and watch the sun goes home The sunsets were beautiful I couldnt remember when we stopped doing that Was it after my parents moved
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