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Foreign country Exotic setting Unfamiliar feelings All these thoughts crowded my head as I walk through the doorway to the building Setting foot in an Italian dance club although a new place has the same mood as a club in the US On vacation in Florence wanting to experience new things I ventured to a local discothque to get a taste of the nightlife My senses come to life as I creep across the dance floor observing my surroundings Sweaty bodies dance to the beat constantly moving never stopping even to breathe One couple dancing intimately in the corner draws my attention because of the intenseness of their actions toward one another Packs of males slither across the floor as if looking for their next victim flirting with the nearest lady they can find Barely-there outfits create a wide spectrum of colors and shapes on the dance floor as bodies move in and out forming a human jungle The intensity of the strobe lights hurt my eyes as I strain to see across the room The overwhelming smells on the dance floor engulf me as I make my way through hoping by chance to recognize someone An odd odor a mix of sweat and various scents of perfume hits me head on as I make my way through the crowd of people in front of me Every person seems to be wearing a different perfume or cologne and the mixing of all of them gives me an instant headache The stench of burning or long ago burned cigarettes fills the empty holes in the atmosphere As I look up I realize there is a huge cloud of smoke hovering over the room created by the many cigarettes and adding to the feeling of suffocation in the tiny spaceI finally see the bar in the distance and make my way over sidestepping a crowd of rowdy twenty-somethings The man behind the bar looks at me peculiarly
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