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The year is 1912 The so-called unsinkable ship has been lost at sea Everyone in the States was horrified by this tragedy This was the same night my partner and I hosted poker night at the office downtown This was the first night McKensey had me down by five games I was just dealt an unbelievable hand when we heard someone pounding on the door downstairs I didnt want to leave my hand alone but I knew I had to see what was the matter from the faint cries for help I rushed down and opened the door and was blinded by rain Help there has been a murder Ok Mrs just calm down and tell me what happened She paused a moment to grasp some air There has been a murder at Solovons bar Solovons Bar I exclaimed I was just there two hours ago The lady quickly ran away like she had to be somewhere in a hurry Then McKensey and I grabbed our coats to go down to the bar As we were running out we saw two men escorting the woman that had ran away When we finally entered the bar we could smell the stench of death in the air There was a large crowd around the corpse Everyone get back I had to keep the scene like it was so I could gather clues and evidence I told McKensey to start dusting for prints and mark off the area around the body while I interviewed people I first ordered everyone to stay inside the bar until I was finished gathering reports First I went to the barkeeper to ask him questions Okay Solovon what in the hell happened here I didnt see anything The storm caused a blackout in the bar Well did you here anything here at all All I could here was these drunk people yelling and cursing at the storm for making them miss radio broadcast
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