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ONCE UPON A TIME ARGH Im going to get you you little brat screamed Taylor a 14 year old native of Calgary Alberta Taylor whizzed around the corner to beat up her little brother Jay Ha I got you Boomer exclaimed Taylor Im gonna tell mom and your gonna be in trouble he he replied Jay As soon as Jay made that remark Taylor let him free Jay knew that saying that hell tell on her would convince her to let him go anytime so he ran around her and pulled her long auburn hair Taylors soft green eyes all of a sudden turned hard dry furious green as she grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and threw him out in the stormy cold air outside and locked the door Let me in Im not a dog yelled Jay Oh yes you are replied Taylor and she grabbed a book and spoke gibberish to the ceiling All of a sudden Jay started feeling funny in his tubby stomach When Taylor was done gibber jabbering she opened the door and said Come here boy When Jay saw her it looked like she had grown about three feet because all he could see was her knees He walked in and sat down looked at the black screen and saw a reflection of a beautiful golden retriever You got a new dog Taylor asked Jay You werent mad at me Taylor You just threw me outside because you didnt want me to see the new dog yet exclaimed Jay That is what you think said Taylor Jay stared at her in confusion while Taylor got a mirror She showed him what he was He was a dog He screamed but actually he barked while running in circles chasing his tale without even knowing it Taylor hooked up his leash on his collar and called the Humane Society They were
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