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How Shintoism and Buddhism Intersected to Shape Japan

This religious studies essay gives detailed introductions to Shinto and Japanese Buddhism, providing an overview of beliefs and histories. The student notes factors that have facilitated coexistence and syncretism in the specific Japanese context.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You've done well in bringing together the various details and strands in a balanced manner on the page. The reader can sense the research and information that has gone into the discussion; as possible, integrating your sources via in-text citations will enhance the reader's understanding of your research work, as well as build ethos.

Moving forward, focus on organization and efficiency of argument. As I read, I noticed a few places where information was repeated or where paragraphing boundaries didn't quite line up with the movement in the discussion. Corralling the various points with purpose will enhance flow and readability. Finally, check once more against your style guide for line and page formatting -- the end of the document sees some inconsistent formatting (or file issues) that should be straightened out before any final submission."

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