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The Benefits of a Universal Moral Code

This essay is about morality. The author focuses on the philosophies of W. T. Stace, who argues that if morals are relative, no one can judge what is best. The author argues that there is no modern morality, just reality. The author states that there needs to be universal principles and mentions that God is a creator of such principles.
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"Your paper is off to an excellent start! The document's formatting is fantastic and essential for good reading comprehension and writing cohesion. The other aspects only need minor changes to make a significant difference. The first aspect to start with is the organization of the paper. While you have an introduction and a conclusion, they should include a little bit of different information than they have now. The introduction should consist of basic background information about your topic and then end with a clear thesis statement. The thesis statement should tell the reader precisely what specific aspects of the topic you intend to cover and why those aspects are essential. The body of the paper should then align with the thesis statement, and the conclusion should summarize the main points you made in the body of the document and relate them to the thesis statement. Doing this process will not only help the reader better understand your paper's purpose, but the reader will also see that you are focused on that topic throughout your writing. The thesis statement will also help you improve the content of the paper. The thesis statement is like a roadmap for the paper. You should have a paragraph about each specific aspect, and in that paragraph, you should fully explain that aspect. The last aspect of the document that needs to be worked on is writing conventions. It would be best if you resolved grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors through a round of proofreading. Fixing these will also improve the cohesiveness of the writing and reading comprehension."

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