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YOURE IN MY BODY So I was sitting at this sidewalk cafe when this bald guy quite big sits down across from me unscrews the top of the salt shaker and delicately dumps a third of the salt in my coffee Delicately Oh I mean it was a controlled gesture He was really controlled that was one of my first impressions but a bit too controlled if you know what I mean Like he needed control needed to have a grip on himself and theres no telling what might go down if he didnt have it Well he said glaring at me Is there a problem I said This wasnt pleasant dont get me wrong but I wasnt too worried Not at that stage I mean it was broad daylight an up market area people walking by and a cop on the corner - what could go wrong Youre in my body he said Pardon I said Thats my body youre in I want it back He was totally serious but I couldnt see his logic He was a few years younger than me more muscular a little taller What could he possibly want with my body which is a bit on the weedy side Im not going to mess around he said Out now Then he lunged across the table grabbed my head with his hands and breathed fiercely into my nose It was terrifying and disgusting at one and the same time I was sure he was going to bite my nose off Then I felt myself releasing from my body blinking into nowhere and thats when I understood the bottom line He wasnt proposing a swap my body for his Oh no He was going to annihilate me I was going to be gone my vacant flesh ready for him It was vomiting that saved me I did it involuntarily the body flushing splurting heat forcing itself up out
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