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An Overview of Tim Gunn's Life and Involvement with Project Runway

In this informative essay, a student talks about Tim Gunn, the American fashion consultant and television personality. The student provides a brief overview of Gunn's upbringing and career prior to his involvement with the television show Project Runway.
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Angela's feedback:

"You put together a good overview of Tim Gunn's life, and it's obvious that you did some quality research into his background. Many of your paragraphs are quite short though, which leads to a choppy flow overall. Consider combining the three body paragraphs on Gunn's higher education and work experience into a single paragraph since the content is all related. When it comes to details such as the name of an institution (e.g., Parsons), it is important to get the information right to build your credibility as an author. Other simple typos include the appearance of "o" instead of "on" and "let's" instead of "lets." Words such as "much" and "bachelor's" should not be capitalized, and commas and periods should come before a closing quotation mark. The title of a television show should be italicized, and there are many sentence fragments in your last paragraph that should be recast to improve the clarity and flow of your writing."

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