scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 740
Of all the careers available to todays society working at an abortionclinic proves to be one of the most emotionally trying mentallycontroversial and involves separation of physical and emotionalprocess In We Do Abortions Here A Nurses Story Sallies Tisdaleuses anecdotes internal dialogue and pathos to effectively communicateher experience as a nurse performing abortions on a daily basis SallieTisdale brings forth an issue that has a long controversial history ofdebate She discusses the issue from a point of view of the oneperforming the abortions She therefore confuses the reader becauseshe conveys conflicting messages Tisdales article is ineffectivebecause she is writing against abortion yet works at an abortion centeras a nurseFirst of all throughout her essay Tisdale switches between talkingabout the necessity of abortions and the guilt behind them Shelogically justifies abortion describing the fetus as at leastinconvenient sometimes quite literally dangerous and as a thingwhose creation has been actively worked against Its existence is anerror However she also feels guilty for facilitating the abortionLooking at the fetus in an ultrasound she comments that she knowshow heavy and correct a newborn cradled feels The creaturerequiresnothing from her but to be left aloneHer gilt also manifestitself in the form of fetus dreams By switching back and forthbetween logically asserting that abortion is necessary and reflecting onher guilt Tisdale states that the torn mental state that results fromworking in an abortion clinic which at the long run will cause her moreproblemsAlthough her writing was effective it was also ineffective at the sametime because her writing is confusing and unclear Tisdale writing isunclear because her story is not structured well and needs to bestructured a lot better it jumps from subject to subject and then backto another subject leaving spaces in between making it hard tounderstand at times For instance in one paragraph Tisdale talks aboutthe process of abortion then in another she talks about all thedifferent types of women and teenage girls who have abortions done andthen on the
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA