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My first impression of Shelbys project is very creative and bright enough to get viewers attention The first thing I see in the watercolor is the movement from original project to the abstract The abstract is changed up from original object enough to catch the viewers eye and leave them wondering what it is that is the point of the abstract I love how the feet and hands are rearranged and that there is no other object to give hints of what it is The representational piece is clearly visible to see what the object is It is the perfect size for the object to be seen Shelby did very well on the value and highlighting I am very impressed I liked how she added a tint of green to bring back the color of the original object The cheetah print cover on the phone was a perfect choice to add it in to give it more interest The cross hatching in the background made i look more appealing In my opinion this piece is very appealing and is my favorite of the three piecesThe non-representational piece is very fun and bright This definitely caught my eye the most out of all three I think Shelby did very well in balancing out colors and shapes I like how she played with some of the same shapes but mixed them up so they looked different The only thing I would say she could do better on is her value and overlapping objects If I were to look at her piece I would want more value to make it even more interestingIn these three pieces I see her object in all three whether its the color pieces of it or even value In the abstract piece I see a pop of color as the background She also put the hands as two different colors and the feet as a purple and blue to add in cool
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