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One day one second and that moment was captured I will never forget the day that every privilege trust and freedom that I had with my parents would become harder and harder to reach it was out of my hands The day that I lied about going bowling and went to a night club would mean that the freedom and trust that I once had would be revoked until the day that I showed them responsibility honesty and respect Without those strengths freedom will not be regained because wanting to keep freedom means that you have to live with responsibility Wanting to keep freedom means being responsible because a world without responsibility is a world with chaos and without order in what way Well if everyone went off and did what they wanted carelessly then we would begin to deteriorate as a country For example in the book Time Enough for Drums By Ann Renaldi the setting was based on the 18nth century during the revolutionary war if George Washington had not taken order or if the British had not taken order then their men would be clueless and careless of how the revolution went Ann Renaldi showed me that freedom can be good and it can be bad she showed me this in the main character Jemima Parents sometimes give their children a lot more freedom then they should have leading them to turn rebellious and take advantage of the trust they have given them Jemima Emerson had all the freedom and trust of her parents but she lost it Why Well she had a lot of it and so she became rebellious untrustworthy and she thought that she could do or say whatever she wanted Freedom can be lost in many ways by lying being sneaky and just not being responsible when your parents trusted you to be out and safe pg 66 Jemimas experience also happened to me at one point I
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