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Similarly to Christy Brown in My Left Foot everybody has experienced significant moments in their lives that have shaped the people they are There is one specific moment in my life that stands out to me as a substantial event in determining my character as a human being Likewise to Christy Brown finally being able to use writing as a form of communication I was finally able to appreciate how lucky I am and realize that many other people are not as fortunate When I was in fourth grade I stepped outside of my comfort zone and unknowingly gained information that was difficult for me to comprehend at the time but ended up having an immense effect on the way I view other people That very day I learned to treat everybody with kindheartedness because you never know what he or she may be going through in his or her lifeAs a fourth grader I didnt have many worries in life as many fourth graders dont I attended school regularly associating myself with the same group of friends Social statues were not yet established at such a young age although there was one girl in my class named Shanese who nobody ever seemed to associate themselves with She was new to the school quiet unobtrusive and she always seemed to have a melancholy attitude Similarly to many other students in the class I disregarded Shanese and continued with my normal activities until one day when I decided to pursue my curiosity about this discreet girl It was time for recess and I told my other friends to go to the swings without me Instead of following them I made an effort to introduce myself to Shanese and invite her to the see-saw with me She agreed with a seemingly uncertain response most likely because nobody had ever approached her in such a way As we silently made our way through the tire pellets to the
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