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In Taking Back Control Mina Raine writes about Beth a very good friend who Raine looked up to However Raine became concerned because she noticed that Beth began to change in appearance Beth has always seemed to me so mature and composed and so in control of her life so giving so caring so nurturing in all of her relationships which is why I was deeply concerned and very much surprised when I began to notice a drastic change in her 3 Beth had a problem because she allowed her boyfriend to take control of her instead of having self-control Therefore this lead her to having an eating disorder and losing control of her lifeFirst Raine noticed that Beth had an eating problem because she would eat her dinner from a small cereal bowl instead of a plate In addition Beth was much thinner and tired One time Raine and her friends overheard Beth and her boyfriend Steve discussing their workout regimen Raine claims that he had her on the same workout schedule he was on but she wasnt the one who was overweight 4 They were on a strict workout routine Beths boyfriend had a negative influence on her because she started eating less and exercising more As a result this was causing Beth to lose control of herself and her own lifeFurthermore Raine and her friends saw all this happening with her They were afraid to talk to Beth about it even though they knew something was wrong What If we were wrong and Beth was fine What if I upset her and she stopped talking to me 5 Sometimes when we face situations similar to Raines we may feel uncomfortable and wonder whether we should or shouldnt do something about it However clarifying things and helping others out is something we should do because friends are meant to help each other Thats what friends are forLater Beth came to talk to Raine
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