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According to the Fifty Minutes story It describes the event in more realistic way because it tells us what happened at the end rather than leaving us thinking The tone that was used to descried Dr Bell and Mr Potter conversations was not so clear because you cannot know if they were angry when they were talking to each other or not The author left this part for us to imagine the language between them The story does not make me fell confused because it describe the two characters Dr Bell and Mr Potter very well except for the third character Katherine Cook which it does not make sense if she was a real or just an illusion by Mr Potter Which makes it Mysterious in this partRobert described Mr Potter to be without hair and his look wasnt easy to remember The author described Mr Potter to be angry and kind of desperate because he was trying to speak to a girl he loved but did not have the courage to approach her he came to Doctor Bells office to blame him and threatening The author gave us a lot of description of what happened in the story but why all this information Most of the information was not very important He was staring from Mr Potter going to Doctor Bells office with a gun the giving to many detail about what happened at the office and the why they were talking The author described Mr Potter to be hasty and was wating for a mistake from the Doctor to shoot him with his gun The doctor was very calm and was keeping him relaxing all the time Then the author surprised us at the end we were thinking that Doctor Bells way to keep him calm did worked but he shoot at him luckily the bullet was far from Doctor Bell The author might want to make the story more exciting and
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