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When I was six years old I was diagnosed with Chronic Migraines It has now been thirteen years that I have dealt with getting migraines more than fifteen times per month Because of this my life revolves around avoiding a migraine for a day or two and pushing through the ones I get Yet when I dance and hear music that daily stress and restraint goes away and I can just move freely and forget about everything that I have been through and deal with on a daily basis Dancing is one of my favorite escapes and I do not know what I would do without it I would probably go crazy because it is the one thing I can choose to do that does not have to do with getting a migraine Every Saturday I dance for seven hours and it is the one thing that gets me through the whole week I look forward to dance class more than anything One day I hope to make dance my career because if I could dance and work then I would never have to work a day in my life I have had people doubt me and tell me that I am not good enough Others have put me on lower levels than I know I could handle For example when I tried out for my high school pomsdance team I was placed on the junior varsity squad and not the varsity Even though I could do everything that the varsity girls could do and even learned there dances faster than some of the girls All that never stopped me from pursuing my dream of dancing or being an artist My dad is a carpenter and I know he enjoys his job everyday because he gets to work with his hands and create and build which is what he loves to do He does not make a substantial amount of money but he is still
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