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"Athena has always been a favorite of mine, as far as the Greek gods and goddesses go, so I enjoyed reading this! I found myself, however, struggling to locate the purpose until later in the paper -- my recommendation is to check against your prompt and determine how to focus the discussion. If this should be about Athena's role in the Odyssey, consider adding an introductory paragraph that signposts this for the reader and establishes a thesis. You can then open the body with the background information you give in the current first paragraph (though this may need to be trimmed a bit, based on what the focus of the essay will be).
You will want to double-space this essay and, when you do, consider paragraph length -- I see opportunities to break up the current paragraphs (especially the first two) into shorter, focused units that help signal movement and shifts to the reader. This can also be a good exercise to think about organization within each moment of the discussion and see what is essential within that paragraph unit."
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Kibin. (2024). The role of athena as guide and protector in the odyssey. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-role-of-athena-as-guide-and-protector-in-the-odyssey-tHSxqJtK
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