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The Three Candidates of Minnesota's 4th US House Election

This essay examines three different candidates for a seat in Minnesota's 4 U.S. House District. The student notes some historical landmarks in this race, such as the significant influence of third parties.
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Bob's feedback:

"There's some useful information here about the candidates. This could be especially helpful for someone who was trying to decide who to vote for. However, it's difficult to tell what the actual purpose of this paper is. This is partially because the introduction is particularly short and doesn't seem to contain a thesis statement.

The language of the paper suggests that this is an objective look at the three candidates, far more time is spent examining McCollum than the other two candidates. You even return to her after discussing Runbeck. The last two sentences of the essay present a sharp change in focus and don't have a place in the conclusion.

Grammar and sentence structure are mostly good, but keep an eye out for small errors. For example, there should not be a comma after the party name in a person's title; it should simply be "Democrat Betty McCollum." Also, be aware of the difference between "insure" and "ensure.""

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