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As a child my biggest dream was to be a dentist I always liked looking at peoples smiles and think what a beautiful smile I was born in Mexico and lived there eight years of my childhood I came to the United States in two-thousand and lived here since Coming to a new country where I had to learn a new language meet new people and basically start a new life it was hard to adjust but I knew it was for a better life and a better future When I first started school everything was really hard I didnt speak the language so it was hard to communicate with classmates and teachers My parents tried their hardest to help me out with homework but it was hard for them too I had no one else to help me out and other family members all I ever heard from them was you will never make it through school in fact you will never graduate they thought I would quit once I started high school But that didnt stop me In less than a year I was speaking and writing English like if I lived here all my life so for that I proved my family members wrong When I was in high school my parents were very proud of me They were happy to see at least one of their three kids graduate Even though it was hard for me not having my parent support all the time because they were always working out in the fields and they came home tired and exhausted I could understand they couldnt always help me out but I knew they would always be there Still other family members never thought I would make it through high school they always told me that I would end up dropping out on my senior year During my sophomore year my dad had an open heart surgery He almost didnt make it
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