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One word that I would describe myself is courageous I never give upeach day in order for me to succeed Success can only be taken if I trymy best every day If I never fall down I would never give up and knowthat someday that I will succeed This is can be described as a new pathuntaken I have already learned Chinese for six years at Evergreen Valley HighSchool This place taught me how to learn read and write Over thereI had learned grammar skills that are helpful to my English and mySpanish The teacher motivated me to try my best and that you cannotmaster a language in one day This can be connected to a saying calledRome wasnt built in one day While I was at Chinese School I feltthat I can find my own voice and learn new things from new people Aftergoing to that school I can feel that this language has helped me withmy English and my Spanish when writing sentences and essays Now that Ihad fully mastered the language I can help people who can only speakChinese and not understand EnglishMy focus on ice-skating has helped me to do better in school It taughtme to balance things out because in life because school isnt the onlything going on your life I first started out to take public lessonswith a group of kids and it was a very fun experience I learned tosocialize interact and meet many people After I had mastered thebasics of ice-skating I started to do private lessons and learnfree-style jumps Even though the jumps were really tough andchallenging I got better at them by practicing them before class and alittle bit after class After going through ice-skating for about 2years I felt that I had really changed as a person I know that yourbrain and your hand are like one machine working to get things done Ifyou think before you act then you will succeed Swimming has
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