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I think part of the problem is that I was perfect once It only lasted for about five minutes but I guess Im supposed to be grateful it ever happened or something Actually I think it kind of messed me up Maybe because I was too young or something I guess perfect usually happens when youre young though You just dont see old people being perfect much Or maybe theyre perfect a lot of the Have you ever noticed the most important things happen when were too young to understand that some big deal is going on I think God should sort of tap you on the shoulder and say Pay attention youre going to want to remember this Or maybe he does but we ignore itAnyway this perfect deal happened when I was not quite 16 I was sort of a jock Well a track guy A lot of people dont think of track guys as jocks Id been this real scrawny kid sort of the class nerd all my life And I was a year younger than most of the other kids in my class which I didnt like much Everyone else was driving and had dates and stuff I didnt date though I mean I wanted to date but I wouldve had to beg some guy to double date I didnt really have any friends that would have done anything like that Besides what I really wanted was a date with like some knockout babe but Im pretty sure none of them knew I was alive Id have probably ended up with some real chubby girl or something And shed have probably been wishing she was with somebody else the whole So I guess I thought if maybe I was a jock or something then girls would notice me But most of the jock stuff I tried I pretty much just got my butt kicked I was really small and I seem
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