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An Analysis of George Bierson's Marijuana, the Deceptive Drug

This essay raises questions about claims that marijuana causes long-term health problems and leads to harder drugs.
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Bob's feedback:

"You make some strong arguments here. Specifically, your analysis of the flawed studies that Bierson relied on is compelling. On the other hand, many arguments you make feel emotionally charged. This is due in large part to the conversational tone and first-person perspective. Removing yourself from your arguments would most likely strengthen this paper considerably as you are trying to present objective arguments rather than your personal opinion. The line, "I believe that research supporting anything can be found if one is looking hard enough" is particularly problematic for several reasons and should likely be omitted. Your role is to refute Bierson's claim, not to question the nature of research and argument itself.

Focusing on objectivity and clearly reasoned arguments rather than raising doubts about Bierson's research will go a long way toward strengthening this paper."

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