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I was on my way to my boyfriends house because it was his birthdayweekend He picked me up for school and I was going to spend the nightwith him We got to his house and started watching movie because hisfamily went camping We really didnt know what to do for his birthdayAt the time I didnt think that my sisters baby would come so early butwhat can you do We finally decided to go to Elephant Rock because Ivenever been there We decided to go to bed early so we could get there ata decent time We woke up at eight oclock we took showers and gotdressed then on are way I was so excited but it felt like forever thenwe finally got there There were already a lot of people there and wefound a spot to park We started on the trail and let me tell you neverand I say never wear flip flops to Elephant Rock We got on the largestrock and I called my mom to tell her were I was Then she told me thatmy sister was having really bad pains so they took her to the hospitaland she was only dialed to two which they said they couldnt keep herSo at that time we were hungry so we got Imos and eat like pigs we wereso stuffed and then we felled tired So we headed back to Calebs houseand fell asleep The next thing I know is his house phone is ring offthe hook I answered it they told me to hurry up shes having the babySo we jumped in the car hurried and got my friend Jessica then rushed tothe hospital When we got there everybody was their We all were tryingto guess what time she would be born I guess ten fifty but ToriaunaZeldamarie Griffin was born on April 17 2010 at ten fifty three onCalebs birthday I have to say shes my world and my sister to
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