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It was a cold night it had to be only like 30 degrees and it was raining hard outside Im talking about one of those rain storms where its only seven oclock in the afternoon and its pitch black outside something a couple feet from you was hard to see Lucky for the girls basketball team we were stuck in practice and going nowhere fast because the other players couldnt run the plays right The sound of whistles blowing as Coach Moore and his two assistant coaches stop the girls basketball team from running seventeens Bending over resting with their hands on their knees you could tell they had been running for a while As I continued to look at Coach Moore I could tell he was pissed he dropped his head and shook it side to side repeatedly still blowing on his whistle That confirmed it it was going to be a long night for the rest of the team at least See me I was the best at what I did some would say that I got special treatment because I was the star player on the team I would agree I mean I was watching practice My skills came natural Coach Moore was a slender guy in his mid forties no facial hair you could see he was developing a bald spot in the center of his head surprisingly he didnt have any grey hairs you could see Coach always wore Nike sweat pants with light jacket and Nike running shoes When you looked at our basketball team you could see the world I say this because there were blacks whites Asians Africans fat skinny lesbians and straight I loved those girls even though some of them got on my last nerve like every dayIt was a Friday night home game for the lady cougars basketball team it was a packed house to we were playing our down the street
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