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I could feel the irritation boiling inside my being like boiling water inside a pan Before he even opened his mouth I knew what he was going to say to me Were over I just cant take your jealously anymore I didnt want to hear any of it at all One side of me wanted to cry and beg him to take me back promising that I would change even when I knew I had done nothing wrong The other side of me completely different than the first side wanted to turn around walk away with the glimmering look of confidence in my green eyes as I never look back knowing I deserve a better man than he is Time seemed to go in slow motion as he was breaking our relationship off even when we both knew it was his fault for the way I had supposedly acted to finish off our ongoing relationship My mind wandered to the better times the times that were only a few short weeks agoWhy do you even want to be with me I asked him a hint of embarrassment and curiosity coating my words The real question is he said smiling and his eyes twinkling with their familiar playfulness Why wouldnt I want to be with a girl who gets me who loves me whos just perfect and compares to no other girlWhen his voice had stopped the memories faded and I was in reality again His dark eyes were questioning waiting to see how I would respond to his stupid lies I was incoherent to my mouth opening and forming words without a sign of stopping like a waterfall tumbling down into a rapid river The crazy thing is This is all your fault And dont you dare deny it We both know its true If you hadnt cheated on me this conversation wouldnt have never ever been happeningI was stunned by the new found courage
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