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"You are off to a good start, and with your thesis, main claims, and evidence in the form of quotations down on the page, you are ready to head into the next stage of the writing process!
While reading, I noticed a few tasks that will need to be addressed as you move forward. First, reference to Victorian culture and behaviors will need to be backed up with sourced evidence; the current use of broad generalizations (e.g., "...did not usually exhibit such anger") chips away at ethos and doesn't form a firm foundation for the claims about Bronte's text. Second, some scattered unincorporated quotations (as at the top and bottom of the piece) are difficult to decipher: the reader depends on quotations being integrated and commented on so they can understand how the evidence works with the overall discussion. Third, I notice a number of errors and typos, including punctuation issues and incomplete sentences, that impact clarity. I recommend focusing on the higher-order concerns (argumentation, structure) before tackling lower-order concerns, but do make sure any final draft undergoes a thorough proofread."
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Kibin. (2024). Analyzing jane eyre as a feminist manifesto. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/analyzing-jane-eyre-as-a-feminist-manifesto-bb9mdT7R
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