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I was walking down the long narrow hall when I saw a girl looking lonely and alienating herself from everybody else I didnt understand why she alienated herself she seemed nice and was pretty She had brown hair eyes as green as emeralds and carried herself around as if she was a princess But then again thats the only time I seen her It wasnt a 5 minute stare down either I was walking to my next class and just happened to look her way I didnt have any emotional interest in her but I did wonder who she was So instantly I asked around school to find out what her name is to begin with So I began to ask questions and being shy little ole me I had to add her on social networks before I were to even confront her in real life Before I even found out her name people told me about how much of a slut or whore she is Im not going to say I dont base people off of what their reputation is because everybody has before But Im not the one to do it to everybody I hear of because if I were to many of my friends would be much worse people than I know they are I used to all the time Right off the bat my mindset towards her was bad I then found out her name and added her on Facebook I didnt even message her until about two weeks after sending the friend request But I had seen constant statuses about her being lonely and sad but she always looked so happy Its like she didnt have friends either she had many and she just didnt associate with them as much
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