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I want you to visualize yourself as a young 13 year old girl who is new to a predominately white school She doesnt get to pick out her clothes but her mom does for her shes not the prettiest girl who you have seen and she is probably the only Indian in an almost all white school She recently just moved to this town and doesnt know anyone All the other kids have known each other for years and years now however she hasnt had the best time fitting in Who may you ask this girl is Unfortunately its me It was 3 oclock on a Friday afternoon before the weekend My mom picked me up from school and I scurried to get in the silver Toyota 4runner I held back the tears as always in the back seat of the 4runnerHow was your day sweetie my mom asked I start contemplating on if I should tell my mom what really happened today I just went with a simple answer that doesnt need any explanation Fine I uttered with the worlds fakest smile All that was on my mind was that there was one more stop light until getting to the house When we finally arrived to the house I run upstairs to my room and open the first drawer where I kept my cashmere scarfs Underneath all those silky and velvety scarfs was my diary calendar where I wrote down what happened every day Lets just say there were more negative comments than positive Writing it down was my escape to everything because it makes the pain I felt easier to forget I opened up the page to September 28th and wroteToday was an okay day a lot better than the other days Ive had Today Brooke Ciara and Katie said my parents must feel really bad for me since Im probably the ugliest piece of crap they have ever seen Am I Are
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