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Kathleen is 16 years old and is infuriated at her younger sister Sammy for telling on her for lying to her parents Kathleen is now grounded and stuck at home on a Saturday night with her 18 year old sister Amanda Kathleen decides to discuss her problems with Amanda Although Kathleen feels as though her mistake is no big deal Amanda thinks otherwise KATHLEEN Ugh Sammy is such a little snitch She couldve just kept it to herself but no she had to tell mom and dad What is wrong with her If she did something wrong I would keep it a secret Okay your right I wouldnt but still Yeah I know I shouldnt have lied about going to that party but there was no way that they would ever let me go They would have never found out that I wasnt sleeping over at Lucys if that little brat kept her mouth shut Wait so youre saying I deserve to be grounded Who am I talking to again Last time I checked you used to sneak out to go to parties all the time Well if you learned from your mistakes I should too Going to the party was just an innocent learning experience Thats no reason to be in trouble right What do you mean Im being irrational What does that even mean anyways Since when did you become miss know-it-all Yeah okay whatever You know what I dont even care I dont need your advice Thanks for siding with me so called sister I thought you were supposed to take my side on these things No youre not trying to help Youre just trying to agree with mom and dad to get on their good side I dont want to hear it Just get out of my room
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