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Attention Shoppers The store will close at twelve due to the session It was the night before Christmas and I had one last present to buy for my mom I had already got the rest of my familys presents and I had less then 30 minutes to get the last gift The store was full everywhere I turned there was someone bumping my shoulder I went to the jewelry department I did not have a lot of money to work with 1574 to be exact I was looking for something that would mean a lot to my mom As I was browsing through the jewelry department I stumbled past a display of gold rings When I started to look through them I thought it was hopeless since most of them were men rings All of a sudden I stopped and stared at the most perfect ring It was gold with a mother and her son holding hands All was good until I checked the price tag It read 2099 At this time I felt like all was lost As I started to walk away I noticed a saint of a sign The sign spoke of a 50 percent sale on all jewelry Without thinking I turned around and took the ring to a register This was all so perfect and there was but fifteen minutes left for the store to closed and I had all my shopping done When I got to the register I placed the ring on the counter and waited for my tally I reached for my wallet when all I found was pocket lint My wallet had been picked pocketed After settling down from the shock of my wallet gone missing I went to put the ring back On the way back thoughts were going through my minds like stock cars on the track Should I take the wallet or should I not that was the question 15 minutes to
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