scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 663
Cinderella Get over here right now you lazy girl I screeched at Cinderella until she finally appeared in the doorway curling iron in her hands She scurried over to my chair and started to do my hair for the princes ball tonight My sister was sitting next to me doing her makeup when she dropped her eye shadow and it spilled all over the floor She grunted and yelled Cinderella what are you waiting for Clean this mess up I then spit back at my sister She is trying to do my hair you idiot She doesnt have time to clean up your messes You are so clumsy My annoying sister stomped out of the room yelling for mother At least I would have a little quite so I could think of a way to get the prince to ask me to dance When my sister Mother and I were finally finished getting readyCinderella asked Mother Madam I have finished all my chores may I come to the ball as well Before my mother could even blink I pushed Cinderella over She knocked into Mothers favorite glass vase and it fell to the floor and shattered into a million pieces Look what youve done Cinderella It looks like you havent finished all your chores Then I grabbed my mother by the arm and pulled her out the door On the way out I knocked over another vase except this one was filled with water I then yelled Cinderella Cinderella get the broom Now I was snickering as we hopped into the carriage I was just about to accidently bump into the prince so he would ask me to dance when everyone froze All of their eyes were directed towards the main entrancewhere a golden figure stood She sauntered down the steps
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA