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Big 3 Issues not having varied sentences keeping it interesting andlengthening the essayHe was an old wise looking man who stared up into the camera with alook of dignity The first thing I noticed was his long silver beardthat looked to be full of secrets This man was planted into my historybook and we seemed to be having a staring contest as my teacheraimlessly tried to lecture me and my fellow classmates After only afew minutes I finally decided to let the strange looking man win andbegan to peer out from my book My eyes were unwillingly directed to alarge gleaming canvas that my teacher held high above her head in animportant even proud way At first glance my boredom suddenly turnedto a sparkling curiosity The canvas was filled with a beautiful arrayof lavenders creams and sunlight It was like all the colors scentsand sounds of springtime had melted onto this one image I could seethe bright and lively flowers feel the warm sunshine and even listento the glistening river simply by looking at it It all seemed so muchgreater than anything I had seen beforeAs I was immersing my senses I noticed the soft blurred brush strokesthat somehow came together to form a beautiful landscape It wasmagical I couldnt possibly understand how one could create somethingas beautiful and complex as what was right in front of me Who didcreate it anyway Was this place really as beautiful in person As Iwas pondering over many thoughts similar to these my teacher declaredthe words Claude Monet in a rather large and dignified manner Immediately we were directed back to our history book where I againsaw the strange man staring up at me This man my teacherexplained is the artist behind this paintingAlthough I was intrigued the way she continued to explain who he wascould not keep my attention span I
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