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How many sisters do you want to have My mother used to ask me I always wanted one sister but I never thought that I was going to have two instead It took me sometime to realized that I was going to be a big sister and that I was going to have to take care of both of them Although both my sisters are very active in school they are very different when it comes to responsibilities and above all they are very different in personalitiesTo begin both Heidi and Pamela play sports For example Heidi participates in soccer at Coughlin High School and her position is central defenderHeidis teacher encourages her by saying that if she continues to do well she has the possibilities of receiving a scholarship in fact Heidi has received a variety of calls from different sponsors offering her multiple scholarships Similarly Pamela participates in the swimming team at Coughlin High School She swims free style Pamela has won many Trophies for her outstanding achievement in this sportAs anyone can see both my sisters are very athletic in their schoolOn the other hand one of the differences between my sisters is their responsibilities To illustrate Heidi always takes care of all her chores and tasks that she has to do around the house therefore my mom is always giving her what she wants On the contrary Pamela is more of a lazy person she never does what my parents ask her to do she is always breaking curfew and she never wants to help around the house When it comes to responsibilities both my sister are very differentIn particular the biggest difference of all is the personalities between my sisters For instance Heidi is more of an outgoing person everywhere she goes she tries to make friends and even if she is in an awkward situation she tries her best to belong Conversely Pamela has shy personality She has
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