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Comparing and Contrasting Theodore Roosevelt and Woodrow Wilson

In this compare and contrast, the student finds that Theodore Roosevelt and Woodrow Wilson had much in common despite belonging to differing political parties and having different appetites for conflict (T.R.'s Rough Riders as opposed to Wilson's isolationism).
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've written a focused and well-organized essay with a lively voice. Some of the stylistic flourishes (the title, the pun) do make me wonder who the audience is, so I will advise thinking through the rhetorical situation to make sure those are appropriate. That being said, there is a friendly quality to the writing that encourages the reader to continue reading. I do spot some awkward diction and errors not related to style that should be attended to with a thorough proofread.

The compare and contrast is a fairly straightforward affair here, again facilitating readability, but this may mean some missed opportunities to achieve more analytical depth. For example, the discussion about political parties could use more context to explain what that difference means for their platforms, and the conclusion might do more to help the reader understand what the similarities and differences tell us about the role of president, what America values in a leader, the demands of the time period, etc., to give the reader more analytically sophisticated takeaways."

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