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Hallie is a friendly warmhearted teenager who is passionateabout swimming cheer leading and horseback riding She connects withand is comparable to horses in many ways Horses tend to be very brightcomforting animals with wild sides They gallop and buck around thefields just to have fun Being able to let go and run free withoutthinking or being told what to do is a horses greatest joy The very calm personality of Hallie makes it easy to understand her andmake you feel relaxed too She is also very comforting and makes youfeel like you can say anything in front of her As well as Halliehorses are often easy to connect with and understand when they are calmIn a way they can read your mind For example if you are scared whenyoure riding a horse about to go over a jump the horse will refusebecause he is now scared too and has no one to trust Once you show themthat you are trustworthy they pay attention to you and know whatyoure going to do nextNot only does Hallie have a love for horseback riding cheerleading andswimming but also a love for architectural design and buildings WhenHallie grows up she wants to design and manage her own hotel Peoplearent the only ones who want to come up with their own life plan oftenhorses do too Horses want to ride away wherever they want to havecontrol of themselves and do as they please They dont necessarily wantto work for someone else Both horses and Hallie want to do what theylove while making sure they are in charge of their own dream or plan The thought of school is not very exciting to Hallie However when sheis alone she loves reading and writing just like what she does inclass Having to work all day for someone else even if it benefitsthem isnt much fun for Hallie or horses Horses enjoy having freedomto make their decisions as
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