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Jeff sat at home all day earning his high school education through his computer He took five classes consisting of math language science social studies and health He never had any chances to interact with real people other than his parents Jeff wasnt very into out of school activities music or sports Therefore he had no friends whatsoever and became very bored because he was perpetually alone About three-quarters of the way into the school year Jeff became depressed He was always alone and was friendless He felt that no one with the exception of his parents cared about him Sometimes Jeff even felt that his own parents were not concerned with him because they were the ones who enrolled him in this online school anyway Unfortunately Jeff ended up taking his own life because of his lack of feeling important If only Jeff was put into a traditional classroom school Then maybe he would not have been so solitary Online schooling is something that is fairly new Online schooling is a very faulty program It causes antisocial behavior boredom of school and only offers visual and audio educationFirst of all being anti social or lacking friendly peers can be a deadly issue Possessing friends can help with that issue because they gives people happiness and happiness is an extremely crucial part of life Friends give support when it is needed and encourage having a good time In a traditional classroom school there are plenty of people to make friendly relationships with There are hundreds of people to connect withOnline school does not allow people to have a real relationship with others That is because there are no physical people to get to know Knowing that someone is always there to assist with anything including school work is always comforting Comfort can help people succeed in things they are not yet comfortable doing Being around friends makes everyday a party even at school They make
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