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Im a city girl at heart the night lights and day drama always grabbed hold of me as I walked the streets of East Orange New Jersey On the other hand North Carolina never gave me the adrenaline that New Jersey offered I went to school in North Carolina andI stayed every summer in New Jersey New Jersey and North Carolina both have beautiful wildlife scenery but New Jersey has more recreational benefits educational opportunities and is has a more diverse communityWhile staying in New Jersey I was able to attend free swim classes attend a community cheerleading camp and go to the local gym free of charge The community helped feed kids doing the summer by having cookouts once a month In addition to the cookouts a church came to get the children every Friday and Saturday and fed them after religious services In contrast North Carolina has only recently begun to offer these programs but some have so much red tape that most people give up before they ever get to an application or permission slip North Carolina has the southern hospitality feel but have yet to come together as a community for their youth like New Jersey demonstrates Another advantage New Jersey has against North Carolina is their educational programs and benefitsNew Jersey community and government official put education first their schools have fresh science labs textbooks and computers Conversely North Carolina schools still run 97 Microsoft in most schools and use the same books used generations agoNew Jersey offers college courses beginning in 7th grade unlike North Carolina where onehas to be approved by a counselor and then accepted by the community college they desire to attend When I wanted help with my 9th grade school work they gave me free tutoring and I didnt have to wait weeks unlike my school in North CarolinaTo finish New Jersey has a very diverse community My summers there I met
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