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Every girl wants her prince charming A guy who will make her feelappreciated Also a guy that will show his love for her at all timesFurthermore a girl wants a guy she can confine in with her deepestsecrets and problems Noah from The Notebook is a better boyfriend thanJohn from Dear John because he shows his love more hes more matureand is a better well-rounded personFirst of all John from Dear John does not show his love as well asNoah from The Notebook does John rarely shows his love for hisgirlfriend Savannah John chose his job over Savannah For exampleJohn re-enlisted into the army for two more years without tellingSavannah Also John did not want Savannah to meet his dad For examplewhen Savannah and John went to Johns house so he could introduceSavannah to his father John was acting weird repeatedly saying Do wereally have to do this today Furthermore John did not fight for hisrelationship with Savannah For example when Savannah wrote John whilehe was overseas saying that she wanted to break up and that she hadbecome engaged John did not call write or try to leave on emergencyleave to work their relationship out However Noah from The Notebookis continuously showing his love for his girlfriend Allie Noah isalways complimenting her For example every time Noah would see Alliehe would always tell her she was so beautiful Also Noah fought for hisrelationship with Allie For example When Allies parents told Alliethat they were leaving Seabrook to go home to New York early Noah foundout about it and went to New York to find Allie and tell her he wantedto make it work between them and that he loved her Also Noah lovesdoing special things for Allie For example Allie told Noah that shewanted a big white house with blue shutters and a porch to wrap aroundthe house Noah built the house exactly the way she wanted it AlsoAllie loved to
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