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A major concern in my community that should be changed is the condition of the sports fields Almost all of my friends teammates and coaches agree with me that some action should be taken These fields have been in bad condition long enough and its time we make a change First the current fields we use now are a perfect place to get a serious injury Athletes run on these fields but dont notice the uneven ground or the huge hole in front of them And to make things worse there is barely any grass it is all dirt I know from experience that those fields can cause dangerous injuries You can twist your ankle sprain your wrist and throw out your back all in one game or practice These fields are used by young children just starting out in sports as well as high school athletes hoping for scholarships all of which could vanish in an instant Another thing about the condition of the fields is that we need to higher or find people willing to keep the fields in good condition Serious athletes that play baseball want to have a baseball field where the dirt is soft and not rock hard They would also want grass beneath there knees The serious athletes that play soccer dont want dirt all around them or holes that they cant see that come out of nowhere If we could do fund raisers to help produce money then we could pay people to help keep the fields looking good Finally if they fix up the fields talented athletes can perform better than before and they could even be scouted for scholarships This fact also applies with the idea of talented athletes loosing everything in one day because of an injury In fact there are many talented athletes in this community but the bad field conditions are restricting their ability to perform For these
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