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Melissa Benitez Sick on the Inside but Healthy on the Outside One of the moments that are most heart breaking is when seeing youngchildren fighting for their lifes every day Either they were born with acertain disease or they develop a new disease as they grow The childrenare either hospitalized for life since outside the hospital walls germsand bacteria can harm their body or they arent able to move since they areconnected to machines But in other situations children have to go to thehospital every day in order to get treatment that last hours It seems whenyou see the child and the family you think you can understand theirsuffering but in reality you cant until you live it in a firsthandexperience Soon that firsthand experience was coming my way when I leastexpected To the person that I least expected to happen toWhen you see a healthy four year old doing what any child at his age woulddo it seems like nothing was wrong either inside or outside But onedoctors visit one blood test and the blood results can change your worldcompletely upside down My mother received a call in the evening from ourclinic the same clinic that we went to in the morning in order to do ourblood test It seems that one out of her four children at the time hadsomething wrong in the blood stream All I could hear was Im on my waywith my husband and Melissa I would be right back take care of yourbrothers for a little while My mother rushed out the door and into hercar I had no clue what was going on every single instant was so fast thatI couldnt keep up About half an hour passed when my mother stepped intothe house with tears in her eyes With a more discrete voice I
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