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As the sky pulled its black veil of twinkling starts over the sea of blue fluffy clouds the fiery disk replaced with a peaceful golden ball The warm nights breeze drifted past my face blowing my soft black hair behind my shoulders My thoughts whizzed in a whirl of confusion in my brain like five horses Memories flashing A burnt future of ashesWhen we first met I was sure that he was the one I thought he was different from other guys He was a true gentleman His words were sweet and endearing No one had made me feel the way he did His pleasurable praises were fit for a queen His respect for a woman was as charming as a velvet rose His love for me was greater than the star-crossed loversHis breathtaking simile like reflective mirrors shining in the moon light His sparkling blue eyes like marbles glistening in the romantic Saturday sunset As he walked his muscular broad shoulders stayed in their square-like structure His snow-like skin as soft as silk A sight of illusionHis smell of deodorant floated past my nose tinged with a whisk of aftershave The blood-red roses he gave to me with a blissful scent A mingled aromaAs I rest my delicate head on his chest his heart beats like music to my ears His melodious voice singing me to sleep With his tender guitar strumming he stole my heart His laughter filled my soul with lifewe were soul mates I was sure of it The music of the earsAs he wrapped his hands around mine time came to a stand in the mist of butterflies His powerful hands held me close sheltering me a touch of safetyThe taste of silent anticipation before you wrapped your arms around me and lowered your soft rosy lips A taste of warmthThe cold foggy night when the nights sky was covered with a blanket of mist he revealed his true
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