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So today everyone went on a riot yelling out bad things about the government my mom started yelling too i wonder what all thosse bad things meant who understands adults Today mom said she is going to a party with dad last night i followed mommy and daddy to the party everyone started dancing crazy i saw mom and dad they seemed to be having a good time i never seen my parents dance that way i might ask my mom if i could go this morning i asked my mom if she could let me go to the part she said no and walked away she told me later that everyone was expressing themselves as a defiance to the government she said theyre just so disillusioned with the government if only i knew what that meant Everyones acting crazy now and having so many riots because of the government mom says were going to war with other countreied my daddy is the military hopedully is he going to be okay dear diarty sorry i havent wrote to you in a while my dad been in war for a month now we havent heartd about him in a weekWhy did they do this to our family why did our country have to go to war Last night some guy came to our house and he told us daddy passed away Me and my family cant stop crying I hate this country they said we werent going to go to war and because they didnt do what they said they killed my daddy
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