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Jack let the last note of the song he was singing ring through the air The D was way to flat he thought to himself It must be perfect I can accept no less He started the song over again The last note remained flat His face began to darken in color He tried again The results were no difference He began to feel his temper try to take over Calm yourself he spoke silently to his mind Dont let them see your frustration Stay true to your British nature Be cool calm collected So he tried again never settling for anything less than perfection That night at dinner Jacks mom served the usual green leafy meal she always did Jack had been a vegetarian his whole life Not by his own choice but his mothers When at a friends house the night before he starred longingly at the juicy beef before him How he wanted to sink his teeth into that meat He held in this urge the best he could Never let them see you weak That was his motto Jack sat by the crackling fire with his family Tomorrow he would return to prep school His family was enjoying their last night with everyone together Jack sat in-between his brother Garret and his sister Ellis Jack struggled to keep quiet His parents always taught him to be seen and not heard He noticed his siblings were doing the same His dad was telling his mother a story about work that day He described the loud barbarian ways a foreigner had acted in the middle of an England road Jack held his anger when hearing this This man was disgracing England He should have been taught better manners Jack thought He should have always strived for perfection He should have been raised a vegetarian He should have learned to be seen and not heard Jack began tapping rapidly upon the floor His mother
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