The Importance of Mesopotamia and Egypt in Shaping World History

In this essay, the student describes the Mesopotamian and ancient Egyptian civilization to demonstrate their key role in defining the history of the civilized world. The student examines religious, social, political, and economic characteristics of each culture.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You've compiled a lot of research into an efficient presentation, and once this essay has been completed, the reader will appreciate the use of detail and focus. Because this essay is missing the conclusion, it is very hard to determine whether the argumentation satisfies the thesis. As you keep working, keep your main claim and purpose in mind: the importance of each civilization across history. Likely this calls for discussions of impact, influence, and evolutions of the various religious, social, political, and economic innovations that continue to inform modern life.

Of the existing text, I recommend a more robust introduction, as the current first paragraph squashes together the introduction and what will work better as the first body paragraph on Mesopotamia. Other paragraphs show good focus, so apply those strengths to finishing the draft and heading into revision of that finished draft."

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Kibin. (2024). The importance of mesopotamia and egypt in shaping world history. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-importance-of-mesopotamia-and-egypt-in-shaping-world-history-oTs4XoAD

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("The Importance of Mesopotamia and Egypt in Shaping World History.")

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"The Importance of Mesopotamia and Egypt in Shaping World History." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-importance-of-mesopotamia-and-egypt-in-shaping-world-history-oTs4XoAD

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